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BatteryMunkey Commission

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I seriously. Don't know what to say about this. I don't even have a title for it. This is definitely one of the few pieces I put a huge amount of work into compositionally. But something still seems off... I dunno. I'm tired. And I've been staring at this way too long lol.

The two OCs are :iconbatterymunkey:'s characters. The scene suggestion sorta started as just messing around in the Livestream chat room that turned into... whatever the hell this is. I guess a slice of life scene for college/post-college life in the Pokemon world? Yeah, let's go with that.

Now to answer some questions. Yes, Zurusukin is smoking a joint, yes that's a beer bottle, yes the dude's playing Sonic [Classic Collection], and yes, they probably got that couch off the side of the road lol. Oh, and the posters are the commissioner's dog and Megan Fox. derp

And why the silver Gamecube controllers? From personal experience, my original purple controller crapped out on me a few years ago forcing me to replace it with a silver one. That's it really.

Tentatively opening this to critiques. The perspective's all sorts of fucked up, I know. Realistically, that room is waaaaay too small. My bad. Fucking perspective how does it work? Idk. Help me.

Also should this be flagged as mature? I personally don't think so but others might have different ideas. There are far worse things on this site than a Pokemon smoking weed, really.

I have one more commission left but after that... no more. I want a break lol. COMMISSIONS ARE CLOSED thank you~

PS- is the new way DA has the descriptions REALLY ugly for everyone else? Jesus.
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

I would say that even though it's a fanart, it really is bring out the originality of the real world. It's like Scrafty smoking a joint while playing. You got to admit that it did bring out the human side of it. That also includes Simisear and Haunter. A definite slice of life scene.

I also like to say that coloring really match extremely well when you doing slice of life. The lighting and shading are in somewhat in perfect balance. The photo scans on the background is definitely add to the art. Excellent!

Even though this is my first time doing a critique, I would say that one is really good from my point of view. Excellent slice of life of a fanart. My review may be short but I hope that you like my critique and you can expect more from me in the future